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WCPSS: Going for the Goal: Davis Drive Elementary Parents meeting-Level 2 writing example (263 words) |
 | After the marviles party we went to the water and played till it was getting dark. |
| The response exhibits some progression of ideas and events ("...After I got done...After the marviles party...So we all got...After that...When we got home..."), but there is not much pause to elaborate any of the events with relevant and supporting details. |
| The response is organizationally weak and not evenly elaborated. |
| COMICON.com: "MARVEL: THE JEMAS YEARS" ENDS ITS RUN (2831 words) |
| In addition, over the past year, Jemas had become increasingly involved editorial, with a laundry list of forbidden storytelling devices (flashbacks were banned outright) and an approach to storytelling that many creators found baffling or constricting. |
| Such projects as the Jemas penned MARVILLE were viewed as proof that the top gun's writing skill were not as sharp as those of most professional writers. |
| I'm sorry that Jemas had to learn the hard way that his behavior and attitude was not beyond reproach or repurcussions. |
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